One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is distraction in universities regarding the main subject and several other additional languages. It is undeniable that studying plenty of subjects upon only few classes that you need has become inevitable part of our modern world. However, there is no absolute agreement whether additional lessons should be included or not

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is
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in universities regarding the main subject and several other additional languages. It is undeniable that studying plenty of
subjects
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only
few
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classes that you need has become
inevitable
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part of our modern world.
However
, there is no absolute agreement
whether
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additional lessons should be included or not. A commonly held belief is that it is significant for a student to improve all fields in his life by studying them in institutions. As evidence of
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they point to the argument that every individual should know at least
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in every sphere.
Furthermore
, learning
few
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every day can be frustrating and students will get bored immediately. It could be explained by the fact that human beings are always in search of new
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and new
experience
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.
As a result
, a wide range of
subjects
would make a
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colourful.
On the other hand
, some people claim that focusing on things which will never be useful to you is
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waste of time.
For instance
, they may mention that
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and projects
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subjects
that are not related to your major,
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new people in
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field and
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more would be more beneficial.
In addition
, exams on peripheral
subjects
are unnecessary stress and anxiety for students.
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system should avoid additional burdens on their students. In conclusion, taking everything mentioned
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into account I would argue that both points of
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make sense.
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I tend to believe that full focus on needed classes would create more professionals in the future.
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