Some people think that government should tax unhealthy foods to encourage people to eat healthier. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Nowadays, people encourage themselves to lead a healthy life because of many rising diseases. Even though many of them aren't concerned about eating healthily. I agree with the taxation on unhealthy
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and that should be implied to reduce its usage. To start with the consequences of unhealthy
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such
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as sugary drinks, junkies, etc. These kinds of
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make a huge impact on lifestyle and health. In
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modern ,age people likes to eat more junkies rather than concentrate on their health. Because these
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are convenient and time-saving. But consumption of these
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often paves the way to obesity, heart disease, diabetes, etc. Implementing the tax for these
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is likely to create more awareness of and importance of healthy diets.
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, countries like the USA and Mexico increased their taxes on sugary beverages and preserved
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are likely to reduce their consumption. An increase in tax makes people think in the right way and maintain a healthy lifestyle.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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