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Some universities require students to take classes in many subjects. Other universities require students to specialize in one subject. Which is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Universities that require
students
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 to learn about many
subjects
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 are better than beam focusing
students
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 on a single
subject
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, making it more difficult to understand some scientific
subjects
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 that involve mastering other basic
subjects
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 first and it creates minimum interest growth in
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another subject
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subject
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 that they might accel at. Graduate
students
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 should be interested in the actual market demand to be hired.
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, taking petroleum engineering specialisation without teaching the basics of math, physics and chemistry would make it magnitudes harder to comprehend the concept of petroleum engineering. Be it from reservoir characteristics
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 to drilling or even to producing fluids, all will involve the basics from other
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 to form a coherent understanding of the major (Petroleum Engineering).
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,
students
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 who learn about various topics will be able to switch their major in the instance they feel comfortable with another
subject
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 more appealing to them.
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 not only ensures self-satisfaction
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 but
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 motivates the disciples to learn and innovate in the
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 of interest. All in all, diving into various topics in an education institute will make it easier to comprehend majors that involve multiple scientific disciplines to understand,
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, studying
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non-specialized
non-specialised
topic
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 might pique the interest of
students
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, making them pursue newer better
future
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 which will help them innovate and passionate about future work. A society invests in the future by investing in the new generation in universities,
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 will always pay off by selecting the best formula to teach them. A youthful generation full of energy, innovation and
happinies
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happiness
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 an investment.
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