Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Everyone
have
different ideas to Change the verb form
has
solute
a bad Verb problem
solve
situation
. Some people
believe to accept
Change preposition
that accepting
the
bad Correct article usage
a
situation
is the best choice. However
, others
think that people
should try to improve such
situations.
On the one hand, people
trust it is more
better if Change the word
apply
people
not to
solve the bad Fix the infinitive
apply
situation
but to
accept it. In some moments, bad endings or bad destiny is Fix the infinitive
apply
destine
Change the form of the verb
destined
in
Change preposition
for
the
fate, Correct article usage
apply
people
have no power to change it or to improve it,
because time flies really quickly, Remove the comma
apply
as well as
the
societies. So the best Correct article usage
apply
things
is to adopt it and find another Fix the agreement mistake
thing
way
to live in a comfortable way
. For example
, for many people
, it is really hard to live without pressure due to
lack
of wealth and lots of working and family pressure. In Correct article usage
a lack
this
way
, the best way
is to calm down and to receive it. By some pretty things to decorate their house, or to make some friend
that make life more fun. Fix the agreement mistake
friends
Therefore
, people
may also
live with happiness in the same situation
as before.
On the other hand
, others
argued
that Wrong verb form
argue
people
should try to improve the present bad situation
. People
usually Wrong verb form
say
said
“April showers bring May flowers.”. When they Add the punctuation
,said
stuck
in a bad Add a missing verb
are stuck
situation
, it is a really good opportunities
to promote Correct the article-noun agreement
opportunity
theirselves
whatever about their skills or their personality. In general, Correct your spelling
themselves
people
who solve more problems may become a
more mature Correct article usage
apply
people
, and can
It's easier to deal with different Verb problem
apply
type
of bad Fix the agreement mistake
types
moment
. Fix the agreement mistake
moments
For example
, Correct article usage
apply
a
poor Correct article usage
apply
people
will know more about how to save money Correct word choice
than
that
Correct word choice
than
others
who did
not have Wrong verb form
do
this
kind of problem, because they need to find Fix the agreement mistake
ideas
idea
Fix the agreement mistake
ideas
during solving
their financial Change preposition
to solve
Fix the agreement mistake
dilemmas
dilemma
.
In my opinion, I prefer to say that we should have a try when Fix the agreement mistake
dilemmas
me
have plights. We can be better Change the pronoun
I
during
solving problems every time in every Change preposition
at
aspects
. An ancient Chinese said: “Sharp sword from the sharpening out, plum blossom incense from the cold weather”. Change to a singular noun
aspect
Which
means a successor need to against all dilemma. Correct pronoun usage
This
Therefore
, these people
will be more knowledge
and all-round Replace the word
knowledgeable
due to
a lot of things they should understand when figure
out the difficulties.
In conclusion, Change the verb form
figuring
people
can choose to be silent and start a new life when they experience in
a bad Change preposition
apply
situation
. However
, others
including me suggest to keep trying,
and let them escape from the dilemma.Remove the comma
apply
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