Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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different ideas to
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a bad
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. Some
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believe
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that accepting
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bad
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is the best choice.
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,
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think that
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should try to improve
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situations. On the one hand,
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better if
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not
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solve the bad
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but
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accept it. In some moments, bad endings or bad destiny is
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fate,
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have no power to change it or to improve it
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because time flies really quickly,
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societies. So the best
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is to adopt it and find another
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to live in a comfortable
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, for many
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, it is really hard to live without pressure
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of wealth and lots of working and family pressure. In
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, the best
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is to calm down and to receive it. By some pretty things to decorate their house, or to make some
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that make life more fun.
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,
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may
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live with happiness in the same
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as before.
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,
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argued
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that
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should try to improve the present bad
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.
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usually
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said
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“April showers bring May flowers.”. When they
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in a bad
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, it is a really good
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to promote
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themselves
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whatever about their skills or their personality. In general,
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who solve more problems may become
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more mature
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, and
can
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It's easier to deal with different
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types
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of bad
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moments
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.
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,
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poor
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will know more about how to save money
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than
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that
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others
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who
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not have
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kind of problem, because they need to find
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idea
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ideas
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during solving
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to solve
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their financial
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dilemma
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dilemmas
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. In my opinion, I prefer to say that we should have a try when
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have plights. We can be better
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at
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solving problems every time in every
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. An ancient Chinese said: “Sharp sword from the sharpening out, plum blossom incense from the cold weather”.
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means a successor need to against all dilemma.
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, these
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will be more
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and all-round
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a lot of things they should understand when
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out the difficulties. In conclusion,
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can choose to be silent and start a new life when they experience
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a bad
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.
However
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,
others
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including me suggest to keep trying
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and let them escape from the dilemma.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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