Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays , the main

problem

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is growing

traffic

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and

pollution

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because

vehicles

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are increasing these days .

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,increasing the

price

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of fuel is the best way to solve that

problem

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. I agree with the topic and I will discuss how to reduce

traffic

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and

pollution

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problems

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and what are the other effective methods for that reasons.

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with, in the modern

world

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the number of

vehicles

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is increasing .

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most

people

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like to buy and drive modern

vehicles

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.These days most

people

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think, that they want to buy a vehicle because they can improve their status and personality .

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, many

vehicles

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are

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increasing today and

that is

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a huge

problem

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for society .

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,

traffic

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is increased

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the road .

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people

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are facing a lot of

problems

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.because wasting valuable time from peoples'.

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, the number of accident are increasing being

vehicles

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.

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, a huge

problem

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is increasing environmental

pollution

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.Mainly expanding is air

pollution

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.

Vehicles

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are growing and

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releasing lethal emissions into the air by

vehicles

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.

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, environmental

pollution

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is rapidly rising.

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, all the

problems

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can be controlled through the increasing

price

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of fuel .Which is the best way to solve growing

problems

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.

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, when increasing the

price

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of petrol ,

people

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change to alternative ways and they are reducing vehicle usage.Because

people

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do not like to buy

high-pricedprice

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high-priced price

high-priced-price

vehicles

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. These days , some

product's prices

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products

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are very expensive .

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people

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want to save their money and they are changing to public services.After that , the government should take a decision to increase public services.

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as trains, buses, and other public transport.

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traffic

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jamming is reduced and the environment is protected. In conclusion , I will have discussed , what are the

problems

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and what are the solutions for

traffic

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and

pollution

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problems

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.Eventually , I believe that

,

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increasing the

price

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of fuel is the best solution to reduce

traffic

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and

pollution

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.