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The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
 graph illustrates the percentage of
population
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the population
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 aged 65 and more than 65 from 1940 to 2040 in three different countries
in
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apply
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which
USA
,
Sweden
 and
Japan
is included
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apply
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.
To begin
 with, the old
age
population
 in
USA
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the USA
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 were high
in
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at
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 the start comparatively which was around 10% and
Japan
 had
least
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the least
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 old
population
 in 1940
such
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apply
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as
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at
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 5%.
Sweden
 had
7%-8
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a 7%-8
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% old
age
population
. But, with the passage of time, the
population
 of
poeple
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people
 who were 65 years old or more than 65 years
were
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was
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 increasing in
Sweden
 and
USA
.
On the other hand
, the old
age
population
 in
Japan
 were decreasing till 2000.
Furthermore
, in the current time i.e. 2023, the old
age
population
 in
USA
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the USA
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 is 17%-18%, in
Sweden
, it is around 15%
whereas
in
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,in
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Japan
, their
population
 is 7%-8% which is
least
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the least
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 comparatively in the current time.
In addition
, the expected
population
 of old
age
 people in
Japan
 will be the highest i.e. 27%
till
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by
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 2040,
while
 the
USA
 and
the
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Sweden
 will have
round
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around
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 about 23% to 25% of
old
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the old
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age
population
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, usa, sweden, japan, age with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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