The graph gives information about the percentage of the population if four different Asian countries living in cities between 1970 and 2020 with additional predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The graph gives information about the percentage of the population if four different Asian countries living in cities between 1970 and 2020 with additional predictions for 2030 and 2040.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the
percentage
of people residing in four Asian countries who live in cities between 1970 and 2020,
as well as
projections for 2030 and 2040.
Overall
,
Malaysia
will have the highest population
percentage
at the end
of the
period
. In 1970, the
percentage
of city residents in the Philippines and
Malaysia
was nearly equal.
However
, the data for the Philippines will show a lower rate than
Malaysia
at the end
of the
period
. In 2040,
Malaysia
's population will increase by 80%. At the beginning of the
period
, the statistics for the people in Thailand and Indonesia were nearly similar (19% and 12% for each).
Although
the data for urban residents in Indonesia showed the lowest
percentage
at the beginning of the
period
, it will rise dramatically to just under 60%, and it is going to be the
second highest
Add a hyphen
second-highest
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percentage
in 2040. In comparison to other countries, it is predicted that Thailand's population growth rate will be the lowest in 2040.
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