You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorect. write a letter to the editor of the magazin.In your letter correct the information in the article explan why it is important for the magazin to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
letter with the intent of expressing my concerns about the article about the same town centres in my country which is published in today’s newspaper.
, I agree with the information which you mentioned in the newspaper column about the beauty of each
as it is a pride for us that everyone from the corner of each part of the world visits to look around the cultural heritage and how we preserve it.
, I am very disappointed about the point which has mentioned that each town centre looks to resemble each other. Here, I would like to tell you that my
Ajax has a different entrance from other cities. Each plaza in the
has a different structure and design. When you enter the
, different monuments with red and yellow flowers blooming around them signify the symbol of love. Apart from that, all malls and supermarkets are attractively coloured to identify them easily. It will be my pleasure if you visit my
for a short tour and give me a chance to show around you. Perhaps it will help you in differentiating one town centre from the other. Hope to hear from you soon. Thank you in Advance. Yours sincerely, Joe
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