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Directors of large organizations earn much higher salaries than ordinary employees do. Some people believe it is necessary, but others think that it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your of opinion.

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Nowadays, some
people
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 think it is necessary to pay higher
salaries
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 to
directors
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 of large organizations than
employees
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,
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 others believe that it is unfair. I completely agree with the first view. To reach high positions in organizations,
directors
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 must be skilled and experienced. They spend too much
time
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 learning and putting effort into achieving professional qualifications for their high-level positions.
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, they deserve higher
salaries
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.
Secondly
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,
employees
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 who
work
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 as leaders or managers have to deal with problems in their
work
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 scope.
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, many officers have forgotten their deadlines,
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directors
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 have to remind them and even face urgent decisions to ensure
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 progress on
time
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.
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, many
people
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 argue that
directors
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 should be paid higher
salaries
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 than
employees
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.
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, the fact that
directors
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 earn much higher
salaries
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 because paying higher
salaries
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 for them can reduce the loyalty of
employees
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.
Employees
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 have to
work
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 with many tasks to assist their
directors
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, but they receive fewer benefits than
directors
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. In urgent situations, they
work
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 overtime to complete some tasks which are arranged in a short
time
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 by managers. Because of working too much in limited
time
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,
employees
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 will quit their jobs as soon as possible.
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, many
people
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 believe that paying higher
salaries
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 for
directors
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 than that for
employees
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 is unfair. In conclusion,
although
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 some
people
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 believe
directors
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 earning much higher
salaries
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 is unfair to
employees
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, it is necessary to pay high
salaries
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 to managers because their experience and responsibilities are higher than those of
employees
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.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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