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The table gives information about the projected costing for five years in American dollars for three circumstantial projects sensible foresty.

The table gives information about the projected costing for five years in American dollars for three circumstantial projects sensible foresty.
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The table gives information about the projected
costing
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 for five
years
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 in American
dollars
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 for three circumstantial projects sensible foresty. The pie chart shows the
selled
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seller
sealed
 expenditure
mishup
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mashup
mishap
 allocation for the fot the first year as the informations are set up.
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, we can see from the pie chart that salaries
is
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 rated as a
popukar
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popular
 indicator. In
thr
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the
folowwing
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following
years
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, it reached the figure of fifty million
dollars
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. As the table
suggest
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,
yhe
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the
 indicator profile of
dollars
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on
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 the three different types of
country
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the country
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 varies greatly.
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 the majority(50 million
dollars
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) of those in South-east Asia belong to the five and for
years
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, but in these
years
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 West Africa and Central America consists plummet
dollars
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.
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, West Africa and Central America
were
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spent more money in the first and second
years
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. It can be
cleary
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clearly
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obseved
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observed
 that
South-eat
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Southeast
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 Asia
was
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very
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a very
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 upward trend
than
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to
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other country
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another country
other countries
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.
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the sixth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "gives" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the sixth paragraph.
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