Write about the following topic: Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

There are differing views on the aim

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university

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tuition. Whilst one group believes the objective

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this

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level of education is to make graduates suitable for the job market,

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argue the purpose is for the broader benefit of individuals and

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society as a whole.

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essay seeks to look at both sides of the matter. My opinion is that tertiary training serves all the purposes stated.

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with, I can understand the thought that states that attaining a tertiary school certificate enhances one's chances of acquiring a better job.

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is somewhat true. Some people pursue

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studies to equip them for better professions. To clearly illustrate

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, a number of

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jobs

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as being a medical doctor, lawyer or engineer are reserved for persons who have completed

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training and have certificates for these. It is obvious from

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that some careers are only reserved for personnel who have completed

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education.

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, for

persons

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to become medical doctors

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example, it is only logical for them to train

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a

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to enable them

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their dreams.

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hand

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,

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education grooms people to make them fit better in society and live a normal adult life. Taking myself

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, I learnt to be independent during my

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days as I learnt to cook and keep my space clean. These stem from living away from family and having to take up certain responsibilities to live well which I would

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not have if not for that opportunity.

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, Sir Williams' survey of working adults showed that individuals had improved interpersonal relationships from having to share hostels with

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at the

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. They are said to have developed ways to cope with

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from different backgrounds. These experiences

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made it easier for them to fit anywhere when it comes to relating with

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at church, work,

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and personal

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relationships

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to mention a few. The

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reasons

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the added benefits of

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schooling.

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, it is evident that, there are individual and societal gains from tertiary training that

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beyond better job acquisition and I strongly agree with these.