Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents are better caregivers for their young children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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parents believe ,

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that early

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childhood settings cater

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most effective and quality services for kindergarten

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other working fathers and mothers highlight the value of family

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family members as

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providers for

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foster the direct and individual focus on a

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's needs and wants, I believe that the expertise attention in a childcare setting brings more benefits to uplift the personal and social

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of preschoolers. On the one hand, A direct focus and attention towards a

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's behaviours and needs is assured when the

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are under the

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of family members

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as grandparents. Since the responsibility is only on one or two

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at home

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may have a careful consideration of their desires

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more affection and love which is a crucial factor for a very small

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.As an example, a family member would understand and cater for the actual needs of a

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non-verbal

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who is continuously crying, by careful observation and understanding of the

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's behaviour rather than an educator who works with many kids.,

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disagree with

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idea as

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in early childcare facilities are always under the guidance of professionals in the industry.

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, a baby who is under the

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of an early childhood environment is always fortunate to be guided, observed and cared for by experts and professionals in the field. Since, educators and teachers are well trained, guided and equipped they can easily understand the behaviour of

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, exposing

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to grow within a group of

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may enhance not only their personal

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but

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their social and communication

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which is crucial for babies under 5 years old.

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, because of the expertise and knowledge of teachers, they may correctly understand the need to consult a speech therapist for a baby who lacks communication and take the necessary steps to enhance her

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by exposing the kid to many group activities.

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believe that preschool

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who take the

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care

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facility get many advantages to being cared for

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specialists

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developing their socio-behavioural

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. In conclusion,

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some parents value the importance of raising very young

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under family

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to give careful attention and affection, they will get more specialized supervision when in

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care

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improving personal social

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which are crucial for the development of kids

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kindergarten age