You want to complain about the service that you received in the hotel you stayed in while attending a recent meeting. Write a letter to the person who organized the meeting. In the letter Describe the meeting Explain the problems with the service Suggest what the meeting organizer should do.

Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing
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letter
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in
regards
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to the bad services that I
had
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received during the Annual Meeting at Ritz Hotel. I regret to inform you about the hard
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that I faced during my stay. I stayed from 25th July to 30th July 2023 in suit # 303. After a
five hour
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long
jounery
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journey
, I had to wait for an hour for my room to be allocated.
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to that the air conditioner of my room was not cooling properly, despite me complaining about it at the reception, the problem remained unsolved. I was left with no option
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to take cold showers to beat the heat. To sum it up, the services provided by
such
an esteemed hotel left me astonished and disappointed. I would suggest that the organizers should keep
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track of the hotel maintenance and re-check all the facilities before the
guest
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arrive.
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I would like a discount for my next visit. Thanking you.
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faithfully, Sinha.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • appreciative
  • constructive criticism
  • in stark contrast
  • subpar
  • unattended requests
  • amenities
  • disruption
  • impede
  • alternative lodging
  • feedback channels
  • hospitality
  • detracted from
  • future endeavors
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