Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.

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The map illustrates the improvement of the village near London from 1868 to 1994.

Overall

,there have been several changes in the main road, railway station and

motorway

due to

increases in population.

According to

the map, there was no significant change in 1868-1883.

In addition

, the railway station built in the year 1909, which was crossed alongside the village in the south-west. It can be seen some expansion happened in the land in 1922 - 1970. The golf course and the park were implemented in the same period of time and the

Motorway

was constructed and expanded to the south-east. The

Motorway

and Railway track

was

Correct subject-verb agreement

were

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enlarged during 1970

due to

increasing

Correct article usage

an increasing

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the

Correct article usage

apply

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number of people. Turning to the north-east corner of the village surrounded by a Proportion of people. The

motorway

across the main road is located on the same side. The development is very beautiful when looking at the top angle.

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1 paragraphs

153 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Some people think that meat is bad for health . Do you agree or disagree ?

Some countries achieve international sporting success by building specialised facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In many countries, students take a year off finishing school should students take a gap year before attending university? What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Some people believe that men and woman are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want. Others feel that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for woman. What’s your opinion?

Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are important as to a child's development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?