The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the data about the locations visited by citizens of Australia.There are Australian population,new migrants born in English-speaking countries and new migrants from other countries.Included locations in the bar chart are the zoo,library,theatre, and cinema.
Overall
,cinema shows the highest trend with seventy per cent of the people who are born in Australia.Since it is the best entertainment place for young ones,the second greatest result is also
shown in cinema.
Moreover
, the library has the most foreign migrant visitors.Meanwhile,theatre has the lowest proportion of people having a peak at 10%.Lastly
,another location the zoo has the largest peak at 50% of incomers of English-speaking countries.Submitted by aminazhalgas2007 on
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