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The map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate the planned future transformation of an industrial area in Norbiton.
Overall
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, there will be a significant replacement of factories by housing, construction of socially important buildings and expansion of the length of roads. The significant improvement will be relative to factories that are planned to be replaced by housing.
Therefore
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, huge changes will be included in the east side of the town, where there will be a school, and a playground, which is on the right on the road from the school.
In addition
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, there are going to be shops
instead
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 of the factory in the southwest part and a medical centre in the southeast part of the central roundabout .
Besides
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, there will be an extension of roads and the creation of a roundabout on the south side of the town on the road that stretches from the west to the east sides of Norbiton.
Also
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, improvement of the farmland in the north will include the road with housing and the bridge through the river that leads to the centre of the city.
By contrast
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, there will be the line in the north-west part of the roundabout that leads straight to the housing on the north-west side of the town.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "improvement" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • future development
  • main features
  • connectivity
  • residential zones
  • community-focused environment
  • road network
  • accessibility
  • greening
  • parks
  • amenities
  • urban renewal
  • land use
  • infrastructure
  • population growth
  • housing demand
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