The graph below shows information about the use of public transport in one coutry, by age group and location of residence, in 2016.

The graph below shows information about the use of public transport in one coutry, by age group and location of residence, in 2016.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of
people
who used public transportation for the different
age
groups in two types of
cities
, large
cities
and other
cities
.
Overall
, the
percentage
of
people
who used public
transport
was higher for large city residents for all
age
groups, except
people
in large
cities
who were 61 to 75
years
old used less public
transport
compared to other residents.
To begin
, The proportion of individuals who lived in large
cities
and commuted with public facilities for the
age
group
of 0-15, was 40%.
Then
its relative number increased dramatically
while
urban
people
were getting older until it reached its maximum
percentage
of
usage
, which were
people
who are 31 to 45
years
old as its relative number was more than 20%.
Then
, the
percentage
of public
transport
usage
among
people
of
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large
cities
dropped drastically to only 10% of the crowd when the population are 61 to 75
years
old. For the next generation
group
, more than 76
years
old, there was an insignificant increase in public
transport
usage
. As can be seen, the
percentage
of other
cities
fluctuated insignificantly as their proportion differed from 15 to 25% with their
age
group
,
however
, its
percentage
of
usage
ended at less than 10% for the
group
more than 76
years
old.
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