The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The given line chart demonstrates the
population
that lived in cities rates in the Philippines
, Malaysia
, Thailand
, and Indonesia
between 1970 to 2020 and also
anticipates their future rates by 2040.
As an overview, Malaysia
and Indonesia
figures show a striking increase in their population
in this
70-year period. In addition
Thailand
's population
not only experienced a massive rise between 1970 and 2020, but also
it is going to face more growth in population
in 2040. In contrast
, Philippine figures show fluctuations over this
time period.
As it can be observable, at the beginning of the time period Philippines
was the leader in the city population
rate with approximately 31% and Malaysia
, Thailand
and Indonesia
took part onward with 30%, nearly 18% and close to 15% respectively. However
, by 2001 not only Malaysia
had overtaken the Philippines
, but also
Indonesia
overtook Thailand
with roughly 30% of the city population
.
On the other hand
, Malaysia
has become the leader in city population
with a massive difference in percentage number having 25%, 35% and 45% more population
than Indonesia
, the Philippines
, and Thailand
respectively. However
, due to
a huge rise that cities will experience in 2040 Malaysia
, Indonesia
, Philippines
, and Thailand
will have 80%,60%,54% and approximately 50% of their populations in the cities respectively.Submitted by hedoyeraisy on
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