The graph above depicts how varied some new technologies, namely, 4, had become over the years in terms of the number uses.

The graph above depicts how varied some new technologies, namely, 4, had become over the years in terms of the number

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.

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most of them indicate a general rise in trend, how they reached that point differs drastically.

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,

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CD players experienced a steady ascend, reaching their highest point, mobile phones

plumetted

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plummeted

plummetted

wildly over the course of

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6 years. Internet access emerged at a slightly later time,

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showing a slow increase.

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, home computers,

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not having risen nearly as

signifcantly

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significantly

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its

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counterparts, never really went down either. The device, reaching the highest

precentage

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percentage

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CD players, the one reaching the lowest

precentage

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percentage

, being internet access. Having the greatest positive change,

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, mobile phones have substantially increased from just 20% to 70%.

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, home computers had the lowest change of all of them, having a mere 20% increase. The graph effectively represents just how major mobile phones and internet access

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become in day-to-day lives.