You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people believe that the problem of illegal drugs can be solved by just legalising all drugs. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? You should write at least 250 words.

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No i do not agree legalising drugs, drugs are bad for health and especially lungs. Today is thursday. And i will tell you about my morning. Starting at morning. I woke up at 6:00 AM. It felt like i did not have enough sleep but just went through it. so i went downstairs but i got a bit bored so i went back up and got my
phone
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. I used my
phone
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then
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my grandmother told me that its time to eat and i did not notice my mother was calling for me so.... i got scolded :(. so i ate
then
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after i ate i took my towel and went to the bathroom and took a bath. After, i went upstairs and changed to my uniform.
then
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my
mom
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tied my
hair
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and i said why it is not equal soo she scolded me again and told me it was because i was watching at my
phone
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and not paying attention tho i
dont
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understand why my
phone
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was involved. and i tried to fix my
hair
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but it wasnt working so i woke my
auntie
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up to tie it.
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she woke up and tied it to a piggy style. I told my
mom
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to
bearer
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me to
school
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. She said that i will walk because she
dont
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want to
bearer
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me to
school
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cause
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she was mad. so i cried but i just woke my
auntie
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up again
cause
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i was gonna be late. She was tired but still did it. my
mom
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got mad
cause
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she told me to walk but i did not want to so i ignored her and just went to
school
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with my
auntie
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. The end Today is thursday. And i will tell you about my morning. Starting at morning. I woke up at 6:00 AM. It felt like i did not have enough sleep but just went through it. so i went downstairs but i got a bit bored so i went back up and got my
phone
Use synonyms
. I used my
phone
Use synonyms
then
Linking Words
my grandmother told me that its time to eat and i did not notice my mother was calling for me so.... i got scolded :(. so i ate
then
Linking Words
after i ate i took my towel and went to the bathroom and took a bath. After, i went upstairs and changed to my uniform.
then
Linking Words
my
mom
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tied my
hair
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and i said why it is not equal soo she scolded me again and told me it was because i was watching at my
phone
Use synonyms
and not paying attention tho i
dont
Use synonyms
understand why my
phone
Use synonyms
was involved. and i tried to fix my
hair
Use synonyms
but it wasnt working so i woke my
auntie
Use synonyms
up to tie it.
Then
Linking Words
she woke up and tied it to a piggy style. I told my
mom
Use synonyms
to
bearer
Use synonyms
me to
school
Use synonyms
. She said that i will walk because she
dont
Use synonyms
want to
bearer
Use synonyms
me to
school
Use synonyms
cause
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she was mad. so i cried but i just woke my
auntie
Use synonyms
up again
cause
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i was gonna be late. She was tired but still did it. my
mom
Use synonyms
got mad
cause
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she told me to walk but i did not want to so i ignored her and just went to
school
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with my
auntie
Use synonyms
. The end
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • illegal drugs
  • legalisation/legalization
  • drug trafficking
  • regulate
  • stigma
  • addiction treatment
  • drug use
  • addiction rates
  • ethical concerns
  • negative health effects
  • trafficked illegally
  • law enforcement
  • comprehensive education
  • addiction treatment services
  • nuanced approach
  • drug policy
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