The maps show changes in the local industrial village in England called Stamdorf between 1985 and 2015.

The maps show changes in the local industrial village in England called Stamdorf between 1985 and 2015.
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The figures showed the differences in
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England
village
named Stamdorf between 1985 and 2015.
Overall
, there were
total
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seven
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noticable
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noticeable
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changes over the period of thirty years and the most significant one was that more housing estates were built during
this
period. In 1985, a factory was located in the east of the
village
and small inns were located along the main road. A field was located in the west and trees were rarely seen along the road. In 2015, the industrial building was demolished and the inns were relocated to the right side of the map. The field was allocated to the south-western part of the
village
and a residential estate was built. More trees were planted along the commute pathway. In 1985, no structures could be seen on the southern and northern
part
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of the map. After three decades, three
skycrapers
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skyscrapers
for residential purposes appeared on the bottom and two industrial quarters and a construction site could be found
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the northern part of the
village
. The bridge above the river once made of wood was reconstructed with steel
instead
.
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