You are an alumnus (alumna) of a Bluegill University, registered in a volunteer program to conduct informal interviews with prospective students. Recently, an entrant has been assigned to you to have an interview. Write a letter to the entrant. In your letter: state your reason for writing briefly describe the interview and inform the entrant of a possibilty to cancel it propose a convenient time for an interview

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Hello Sir, I am writing

this

letter to request an alteration needed on an

interview

scheduled on

September

3rd. On that day I am travelling to meet my uncle who is currently residing in Ontario province. An airline journey has already been reserved departing on

September

3rd at 2 PM and returning on

September

4that

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4th at

6 PM.

Also

if I cancel the flight I would merely get sixty

percent

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as a refund.

Therefore

I will not be available for a Face-to-Face

interview

with a student named Lucy.

This

interview

is related to her observation about the facilities rendered by our college.

However

, I will come back on

September

5th

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campus.

Hence

another

interview

could be rescheduled for

September

5th.

Hence

, it would be great if you email me the details of the schedule of the

interview

. I hope you will

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it and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Shakir

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

156 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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