You are an alumnus (alumna) of a Bluegill University, registered in a volunteer program to conduct informal interviews with prospective students. Recently, an entrant has been assigned to you to have an interview. Write a letter to the entrant. In your letter: state your reason for writing briefly describe the interview and inform the entrant of a possibilty to cancel it propose a convenient time for an interview
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Hello Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to request an alteration needed on an interview
scheduled on September
3rd.
On that day I am travelling to meet my uncle who is currently residing in Ontario province. An airline journey has already been reserved departing on September
3rd at 2 PM and returning on September
4that
6 PM. Correct your spelling
4th at
Also
if I cancel the flight I would merely get sixty percent
as a refund.
Change the spelling
per cent
Therefore
I will not be available for a Face-to-Face interview
with a student named Lucy. This
interview
is related to her observation about the facilities rendered by our college.
However
, I will come back on September
5th in
campus. Change preposition
to
Hence
another interview
could be rescheduled for September
5th. Hence
, it would be great if you email me the details of the schedule of the interview
.
I hope you will comprehend
it and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
ShakirVerb problem
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