You are an alumnus (alumna) of a Bluegill University, registered in a volunteer program to conduct informal interviews with prospective students. Recently, an entrant has been assigned to you to have an interview. Write a letter to the entrant. In your letter: state your reason for writing briefly describe the interview and inform the entrant of a possibilty to cancel it propose a convenient time for an interview

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Hello Sir, I am writing

this

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letter to request an alteration needed on an

interview

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scheduled on

September

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3rd. On that day I am travelling to meet my uncle who is currently residing in Ontario province. An airline journey has already been reserved departing on

September

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3rd at 2 PM and returning on

September

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4th at

6 PM.

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if I cancel the flight I would merely get sixty

percent

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as a refund.

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I will not be available for a Face-to-Face

interview

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with a student named Lucy.

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interview

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is related to her observation about the facilities rendered by our college.

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, I will come back on

September

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5th

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campus.

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another

interview

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could be rescheduled for

September

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5th.

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, it would be great if you email me the details of the schedule of the

interview

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. I hope you will

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it and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Shakir

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

156 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Prospective student
Informal interview
Volunteer program
Entrant
Schedule
Convenient
Academic background
Reasons for choosing
Campus life
Reschedule
Availability
Alternative time

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