The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two tables elaborate on the transferrences between student bodies in European and Australian colleges in the years 2007 and 2009. Generally speaking, it is safe to say that the exchange program from Europe countries to
Australia
is noticeably more popular than the reverse in both years.
Furthermore
,
while
there was a rise in the number of students coming to
Australia
,
such
a trend was not present for the inverse. In fact, the total number of students who went to Europe stayed the same throughout the period. Taking a closer look, we can surmise that
although
France had the highest amount of students who transferred to
Australia
, it was quickly overtaken by the Germans in 2009.
This
is quite unexpected
,
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since Germany had the lowest number just two years prior. On the side of the student body from
Australia
, France was the most common choice
,
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and stayed on the top across the board. Germany, being the least popular back in 2007, rose a bit in numbers by 2009,
while
the Netherlands took its place at the
last
place amongst Europe countries
instead
.
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