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should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education or it is the responsibility of the government of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves.

#nations #wealth #food #education #responsibility #government #citizens
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There is a huge argument regarding that it is a responsibility of the developed
countries
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 to raise their helping hands to non-wealthy
countries
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 in aspects of food and education,
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 another view is popped up as own government of the
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 should get the responsibility to take a prosperous surrounding to their citizens.I strongly believe that government should take steps to develop their own nation.
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, from past history,there are a plethora of examples where wealthy
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 provide their help to other
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 not only in disaster or other difficult situations
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 but
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 in their developing process.
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, up to
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 Sri Lanka has taken financial, technological and manpower support from Japan and several other
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 to develop health
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 and transport facilities around the
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 there are lots of hospitals that basically run with the help of other
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.
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, to be ,honest even though leading governments in the world helping other
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 to build up their nation, most of the developing
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 stuck at the same wealth level for more than 50 years without any success or any measures to overcome their matters. Most of the leaders and population have a dependent mentality and always seeking donations rather than trying to build up the
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.
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, in my ,view I believe that any person or
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 getting help from others to develop basic needs
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, they won't sense the need to take proper steps to overcome the matter any more.
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, own
nations
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 should take the appropriate steps to develop their
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,
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 than depending on other wealthy
nations
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

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A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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