The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educatioal setting in the UK in 2010.
The chart demonstrates the percentages of male and female
teachers
in six different types of educational settings in the UK in 2010.
Overall
, it can be noted that pre-
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preschool
school
and primary school
had the highest percentage of women compared to other types of educational institutions, whereas
, in private training institutes and universities, the number of male teachers
were
the highest.
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instititues
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institutes
university
, the percentage of female Fix the agreement mistake
universities
teachers
stood at the lowest point. College and secondary school
were above 40 %.
The percentage of male teachers
for pre-school
and primary school
is the the
lowest mark. College and secondary Remove the redundancy
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school
were above 40 % the same as for women.Submitted by s_syedy on
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