The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educatioal setting in the UK in 2010.

The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educatioal setting in the UK in 2010.
The chart demonstrates the percentages of male and female
teachers
in six different types of educational settings in the UK in 2010.
Overall
, it can be noted that
pre-
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school
and primary
school
had the highest percentage of women compared to other types of educational institutions,
whereas
, in private training institutes and universities, the number of male
teachers
were
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the highest. In terms of private training
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institutes
and
university
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, the percentage of female
teachers
stood at the lowest point. College and secondary
school
were above 40 %. The percentage of male
teachers
for pre-
school
and primary
school
is the
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lowest mark. College and secondary
school
were above 40 % the same as for women.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educational settings
  • percentage
  • representation
  • disparities
  • predominance
  • gender imbalance
  • societal expectations
  • historical roles
  • implications
  • trends
  • gender gap
  • educational outcomes
  • gender stereotypes
  • policies
  • initiatives
  • perceptions
  • effectiveness
  • primary school
  • secondary school
  • nursery
  • university
  • further education
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