The map below shows the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fronton, a neighboring town, since 1962. Report the main features and make comparisions if relevant.

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The pictures describe the changes that occurred in Meadowside village and a town nearby, Fronton since 1962.

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as several road constructions and an expansion of civilization and compare them when necessary.

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, as time went by, there were infrastructures that were built, a highway, a transportation facility, and leisure places. In 1962, there was only a small settlement in Meadowside, a small town that was connected using two different roads. On the right side of it, there was Fonton, a city that was and is still crossed by a train track. In 1985, the developer began to construct a housing estate, a superstore, and a leisure complex near the main road that connects Fonton and Meadowside. Between the two settlements, a train station, a hotel,

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positioned behind the station, and a business park were built on the side of the road.

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, an additional railway was added to connect the station and the existing Fonton railway.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

165 words

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The map below shows the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fronton, a neighboring town, since 1962. Report the main features and make comparisions if relevant.

Film stars and celebrities often share their views on public matters that have little to do with their profession. Is this a positive or negative development?

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