The map below shows the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fronton, a neighboring town, since 1962. Report the main features and make comparisions if relevant.

The map below shows the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fronton, a neighboring town, since 1962. 

Report the main features and make comparisions if relevant.
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The pictures describe the changes that occurred in Meadowside village and a town nearby, Fronton since 1962.
This
writing will indicate important features
such
as several road constructions and an expansion of civilization and compare them when necessary.
Overall
, as time went by, there were infrastructures that were built, a highway, a transportation facility, and leisure places. In 1962, there was only a small settlement in Meadowside, a small town that was connected using two different roads. On the right side of it, there was Fonton, a city that was and is still crossed by a train track. In 1985, the developer began to construct a housing estate, a superstore, and a leisure complex near the main road that connects Fonton and Meadowside. Between the two settlements, a train station, a hotel,
that is
positioned behind the station, and a business park were built on the side of the road.
Moreover
, an additional railway was added to connect the station and the existing Fonton railway.
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