some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion. #people #exercise #health
Many believe that
exercise
plays an important role Use synonyms
for
good Change preposition
in
health
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while
others think that Linking Words
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diet
with proper nutrition is Correct article usage
a diet
best
key method for it. It seems to me that a healthy Add an article
a best
the best
diet
is more necessary than Use synonyms
exercise
for a healthy body.
On the one hand , Doctors suggest that everyoneUse synonyms
to
do Fix the infinitive
apply
exercise
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everyday
because it keeps our body fit physically Replace the word
every day
as well as
mentally. By doing Linking Words
yogas
, our mind thinks well and Fix the agreement mistake
yoga
obtain
good ideas . Correct subject-verb agreement
obtains
For instance
, a survey conducted by Linking Words
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health
department proves that if a person Correct article usage
the health
doing
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does
exercise
daily Use synonyms
then
he reduces Linking Words
his
70 Correct pronoun usage
apply
percent
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per cent
health
problems like Use synonyms
control
cholesterol level, blood pressure, obesity, heart Replace the word
controlling
diseases
etc. Fix the agreement mistake
disease
Additionally
, by doing physical activities Linking Words
people
can feel active for the whole day and do their work Use synonyms
with
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in
proper
manner.
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a proper
On the other hand
, specialists suggest that Linking Words
people
should eat food Use synonyms
having
all Wrong verb form
that has
nutrients
. If Correct article usage
the nutrients
people
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does
not take Change the verb form
do
proper
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a proper
diet
they feel tired and can not do any work actively. Use synonyms
According to
dieticians, if someone Linking Words
miss
their meal they might suffer Change the verb form
misses
with
many Change preposition
from
health
issues Use synonyms
likes
headache , fever , laziness etc. Wrong verb form
like
Moreover
, Linking Words
proper
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a proper
diet
plan makes us happy and active and our Use synonyms
mind
can Fix the agreement mistake
minds
also
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take
important decisions properly.
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make
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, Linking Words
although
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,
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apply
exercise
is good for Use synonyms
health
, if Use synonyms
people
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does
not eat Change the verb form
do
Correct article usage
a balance
balance
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balanced
diet
they might suffer from many Use synonyms
health
disorders. Use synonyms
Diet
plays 70 Use synonyms
percent
and Change the spelling
per cent
exercise
plays 30 Use synonyms
percent
role in our lives.Change the spelling
per cent
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