The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
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Overall
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, it can be seen that there was an increase in the
consumption
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of Fairtrade-labelled
coffee
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and
bananas
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from 1999 to 2004 in most of the five European countries mentioned. Switzerland and the UK had the most significant changes,
while
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Sweden had the smallest variation. In the UK, the
sales
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of Fairtrade-labelled
coffee
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increased from 1.5
million
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euros
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in 1999 to 20
million
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euros
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in 2004.
On the other hand
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, the
sales
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of
bananas
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in the country increased five-fold from 1
million
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euros
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to 5.5
million
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euros
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during the same period. In Sweden and Denmark, the
consumption
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of
coffee
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remained almost constant,
while
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the
consumption
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of
bananas
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decreased by half. Belgium experienced a significant change in banana
consumption
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, with
sales
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increasing from 0.6
million
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euros
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in 1999 to 4
million
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euros
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in 2004. In Switzerland, the
sales
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of
bananas
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increased from 15
million
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euros
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in 1999 to 47
million
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euros
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in 2004,
while
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the
consumption
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of
coffee
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doubled from 3
million
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euros
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to 6
million
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euros
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, coffee, bananas, sales, million, euros with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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