The graph below shows the amount of UK investments in clean energy from 2008 to 2015.

The graph below shows the amount of UK investments in clean energy from 2008 to 2015.
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The bar graph provides information about clean
energy
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investment in the UK
such
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as solar, wind, clean
energy
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smart
technologies
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and other sources in the years 2008 and 2015.
Overall
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, the highest amount invested in other ecosystems followed by the
energy
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smart
technologies
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and win. And the least was solar
energy
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. All of the eco-
energy
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sectors experienced fluctuation throughout the year.
Firstly
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, the UK government invested in the other eco sector about 2.5
billion
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in 2008 and increased around 5.7
billion
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in the year 2009.
However
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, the second large amount was
energy
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smart
technologies
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followed by the wind approximately 2
billion
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to 2.3
billion
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and rose to about 10 to 8
billion
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in the year 2009.
On the other hand
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, in 2010 UK government invested in solar
energy
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which was the lowest and it is inclined to almost 3
billion
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and remain constant till 2013.
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, it dramatically rose by 1
billion
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in 2014 and decreased in 2015 and the highest investment was made in other eco-systems followed by wind and
energy
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smart
technologies
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, technologies, billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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