The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the waterfront area of a town called Darwin between 2009 and 2014.
The given maps depict the development of a town named Darwin from 2009 to 2014.
Overall
, most of the upper part remained touched Linking Words
while
the industrial Linking Words
area
was changed to trees was the most noticeable development .
In 2009, the majority of the town was an industrial Use synonyms
area
, which Use synonyms
got
replaced after 5 years by Verb problem
was
the
trees. There was Correct article usage
apply
also
the addition of a harbour in the sea, connected with a new footpath through the trees Linking Words
area
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, there used to Linking Words
have
just three residential accommodations, but in 2014, the number was twice more than that 5 years prior. Verb problem
be
Along with
a new university next to it.
The smaller industrial Linking Words
area
was Use synonyms
also
replaced by a swimming pool. Linking Words
On the other hand
, the school, convention centre, the main road, the lake, the fishing Linking Words
area
and Use synonyms
also
the two swimming pools near the sea Linking Words
on
the upper industrial Change preposition
in
area
were all unchanged after the developmentUse synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
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