The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the waterfront area of a town called Darwin between 2009 and 2014.

The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the waterfront area of a town called Darwin between 2009 and 2014.
The given maps depict the development of a town named Darwin from 2009 to 2014.
Overall
, most of the upper part remained touched
while
the industrial
area
was changed to trees was the most noticeable development . In 2009, the majority of the town was an industrial
area
, which
got
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replaced after 5 years by
the
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trees. There was
also
the addition of a harbour in the sea, connected with a new footpath through the trees
area
.
Furthermore
, there used to
have
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just three residential accommodations, but in 2014, the number was twice more than that 5 years prior.
Along with
a new university next to it. The smaller industrial
area
was
also
replaced by a swimming pool.
On the other hand
, the school, convention centre, the main road, the lake, the fishing
area
and
also
the two swimming pools near the sea
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the upper industrial
area
were all unchanged after the development
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