Some people like to try new new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.

Nowadays, human life is full of choice and
this
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various
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according to
the
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gap. Some human likes to get new experiences in spite of, does not like to same
things
to do.
Moreover
, some of them are
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do
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in doing
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same
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the same
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things
. I would like to say,
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mention
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above the
age
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for
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reason. In my point of view, I am going to explain with relevant
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further
paragraph. On the one hand,
People
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attitude
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attitudes
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will
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on
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their
age
.
at
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this
time
younger generations are most of the
time
interesting
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get
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in getting
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new experiences.
Therefore
, they are trying to visit other countries and try to gain experience of different cultures, new languages, and different
type
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types
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of foods.
For instance
, in my experience when I was
university
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student, if had
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a holyday
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holyday
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holiday
at all times very much
likes
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to visit
to
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the
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nice places and
also
like
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liked
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to eat
difference
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different
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type
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types
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of food. To be
honest
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at that
time
I don’t like to keep doing
same
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the same
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thing.
On the other hand
, today world older people like
do
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to keep doing
things
they are familiar with in spite of going outside or
try to
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trying
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new foods.
For instance
, our
parent
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parents
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most of the
time
like to stay at home. Sometimes,
ones
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the ones
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in a blue moon only go outside. Because
,
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they like to do same
things
rather than going outside.
For
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this
main reason is they don’t want to get new
experience
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experiences
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in their life.
To conclude
, in
the
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society live with
difference
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different
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objective folk.
Accordingly
, their choice
also
contrasts. In my point of view,
age
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gap
so
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much influence
for
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their choices.
Due to
, that some people like to try new
things
and other
human
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humans
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prefer to keep doing
things
they are familiar with.
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  • Novelty
  • Routine
  • Comfort zone
  • Risk-taker
  • Risk-averse
  • Enrichment
  • Personal growth
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Stability
  • Tradition
  • Habit
  • Familiarity
  • Personal enrichment
  • Life stages
  • Fulfilling
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