Some people like to try new new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.
Nowadays, human life is full of choice and
this
is
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apply
various
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varies
according to
the age
gap. Some human likes to get new experiences in spite of, does not like to same things
to do. Moreover
, some of them are interesting
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interested
do
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in doing
same
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the same
things
. I would like to say, as a result
of
,as Change preposition
apply
i
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I
mention
above the Change the form of the verb
mentioned
age
gap is the main influencing factor for
this
reason. In my point of view, I am going to explain with relevant example
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examples
further
paragraph.
On the one hand, People
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People's
attitude
will Fix the agreement mistake
attitudes
changed
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be changed
change
on
their Change preposition
with
age
.at
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At
this
time
younger generations are most of the time
interesting
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interested
get
new experiences. Wrong verb form
in getting
Therefore
, they are trying to visit other countries and try to gain experience of different cultures, new languages, and different type
of foods. Fix the agreement mistake
types
For instance
, in my experience when I was university
student, if had Correct article usage
a university
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a holyday
holyday
at all times very much Correct your spelling
holiday
likes
to visit Wrong verb form
liked
to
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apply
the
nice places and Correct article usage
apply
also
like
to eat Wrong verb form
liked
difference
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different
type
of food. To be Fix the agreement mistake
types
honest
at that Add a comma
,honest
time
I don’t like to keep doing same
thing.
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the same
On the other hand
, today world older people like do
to keep doing Unnecessary verb
apply
things
they are familiar with in spite of going outside or try to
new foods. Wrong verb form
trying
For instance
, our parent
most of the Fix the agreement mistake
parents
time
like to stay at home. Sometimes, ones
in a blue moon only go outside. BecauseCorrect article usage
the ones
,
they like to do same Remove the comma
apply
things
rather than going outside. For
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This
this
main reason is they don’t want to get new experience
in their life.
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experiences
To conclude
, in the
society live with Correct article usage
apply
difference
objective folk. Replace the word
different
Accordingly
, their choice also
contrasts. In my point of view, age
gap Correct article usage
the age
so
much influence Add a missing verb
has so
for
their choices. Change preposition
on
Due to
, that some people like to try new things
and other human
prefer to keep doing Fix the agreement mistake
humans
things
they are familiar with.Submitted by himalhi.deepthi on
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