The pie charts show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.
The charts compare the
sales
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film
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clothes
in New Zealand in individual years 2003 and 2013.
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Overall
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it is clear that
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film
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music
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sales
experienced the most drastic change over the period shown. Use synonyms
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while
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travel
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clothes
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sales
decreased, the Use synonyms
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for the other two categories increased from 2003 to 2013.
In 2003, the online Use synonyms
sales
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travel
industries made up 36%, Use synonyms
whereas
that of Linking Words
clothes
was significantly lower, at around 24%. At the same time, the Use synonyms
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film
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music
and books accounted for about 21% and nearly 19%, respectively.
In the year 2013, the proportion of Use synonyms
film
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music
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sales
climbed considerably by 12% to 33% of the total sectors and became the highest Use synonyms
figures
recorded in the chart, Use synonyms
while
that of books witnessed a slight rise to 22%. Linking Words
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travel
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saw a moderate decline to 29% and 16% in that order.Use synonyms
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