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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others however believe that school is the best place to learn this.

#people #parents #children #members #society #school #place
It has been observed that few people think that
kids
 should be taught to become
well mannered
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 in society.
While
 rest says school could teach them.
This
 is a partially agrees with the espoused notion. The ensuing pieces of writing intense to delve into
first
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the first
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 part which is
parents
 should teach children followed by
schools
 might be the better area for
this
 learning. To commence with
first
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 point the foremost, when is
parents
 are the role models of every
kids
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kid
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 before adulting age. To elucidate, children imitate
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and also
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also
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and also
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 try to develop behaviour
according to
 what they see so
parents
 must be there about
this
 and teeth, their
kids
, the
etiquettes
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etiquette
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,
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and manners
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manners
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and manners
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also
 correct them whenever
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they
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the
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they
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misunderstood
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. To exemplify, a boy
name
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 Rahul lives beside my house. He’s 8 years old but along his age, his decent behaviour outshines among other
kids
 in my area and showcases how
will
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well
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 teaching has been given by his
parents
.
On the contrary
,
schools
 are the places where
kids
 spend most of
the
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their
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 time. In layman’s language,
schools
 consist of 6 to 8 hours please with money curriculum activities apart from studies. So teachers should introduce personality development sessions in fun Maina every week including video lessons games,
skits
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. To cite an example WHO stated from its research
on
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 2012, that every two out of 5
student which
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students who
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 were taught to behave well acquired better designation in future and gained much respect in society. I hope if both
parents
as well as
schools
 understand the rules and provide better teaching about personality behaviour, etiquettes
parallely
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parallel
parallelly
 so that children will know
importance
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the importance
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 which will make them keep things faster and
finally
 they will be good people to society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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