Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays,
people
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are more willing
in learning
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foreign languages. In past, some
people
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only learn other languages. Some
people
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say that the only reason for learning a foreign
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is in order to travel to or work in
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country
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. Others say that these are not the only
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reasons
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why someone should learn a foreign
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. In my opinion, learning
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new
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language
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helps us not only when we go
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for
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work or
for
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travel. It will be
usefull
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useful
in many areas. In
this
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essay, I will discuss
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both views.
Firstly
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some
people
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only start learning other
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country
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language
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after getting jobs in that
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. Few others learn
for travelling
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across the countries. For
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, When a person
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job
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a job
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from
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foreign
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country
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, he must learn the local
language
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of that
country
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, which will help him to communicate
to
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his co-faculties and other
people
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.
Secondly
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, when we
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new
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a new
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language
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, we can observe a new culture and enjoy it. At
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time, It will help to improve our knowledge. If we know many
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language
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than
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then
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we will have more power of knowledge. By studying
new
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language
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, we can learn more technology, which is discovered by that
language
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people
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.
For example
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, if we go to
germany
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Germany
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for studying
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to study
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than
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then
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we can gain
the
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new technology, which
are
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discovered
by
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germany
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. In conclusion, learning
foreign
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a foreign
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language
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will help in various
situation
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situations
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and
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usefull
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useful
for many reasons. In my point of view, I would like to
prefer
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refer
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others to start studying
new
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a new
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language
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and get new
experience
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experiences
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.
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