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You work for an international company, and you would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter -Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months -Say how your work could be done while you are away - Ask for her/his help in arranging

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Dear Mr Smit, I am Amin one of your employees, I
work
 as an electricity engineer in dispatching department. I would like to ask you for working six months in the company’s head office in another country. I would like to
work
 there for progression. Because
,
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 I intend to promote my career, you know, to
work
 my way up the career ladder.
On the other hand
, I can continue my
work
 there. I will plan my
work
 time,
For example
, I would
work
 from 8 am until 4 pm, and after I finish my
work
 at the head office, I will come back home for half an hour, and
then
 I will start my job myself from there as online. I would ask for your satisfaction with my demand, and I would like in
this
 issue you to help me with my schedule and agree,that I can do very well at my job. Just I need amenities
such
 as a laptop. Thank you for your attention to
this
 important letter.
King
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 Regards. Amin
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