You work for an international company, and you would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter -Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months -Say how your work could be done while you are away - Ask for her/his help in arranging

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Dear Mr Smit, I am Amin one of your employees, I

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as an electricity engineer in dispatching department. I would like to ask you for working six months in the company’s head office in another country. I would like to

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there for progression. Because

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I intend to promote my career, you know, to

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my way up the career ladder.

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, I can continue my

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there. I will plan my

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time,

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, I would

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from 8 am until 4 pm, and after I finish my

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at the head office, I will come back home for half an hour, and

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I will start my job myself from there as online. I would ask for your satisfaction with my demand, and I would like in

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issue you to help me with my schedule and agree,that I can do very well at my job. Just I need amenities

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Regards. Amin

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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173 words

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