You have recently taken a two day course .write to give your feedback to the course organiser and say Guve details of the course What did like or dislike about it Give any improvements

Dear Sir/Madam, I am Ammy ,and the purpose of writing
letter is regarding the two-day course on health and safety at the workplace, which was conducted at Cranbrook
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on the 20th of January,2023. Fortunately,I was enrolled in that course as well. Regards to the bright side, the instructor was a well-experienced and informative person,who was able to answer all the queries of the students.
, he provides in-depth details of the topic
along with
suitable examples. On the flip side, I felt dissatisfied with the length of the lecture because it is 8 hours long with a short period break.
, many learners felt dizzy and distracted as they got hungry and tired after a long sitting .
,I would like to recommend reducing the time of the class in future ,which is useful to keep students refreshed during the lectures
as well as
gives a chance to gain more knowledge from it. I hope you
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keep my suggestions in mind
conducting any course in future. Yours faithfully, Army.
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