The line graph below compares the Gross Domestic Product (GDP) in four countries in billions of US dollar.
The line graph depicts the gross domestic product (
GDP
) of four countries, including Bangladesh, Pakistan, Nepal, and Use synonyms
Malaysia
, from 2010 to 2015 in billions of US Use synonyms
dollars
.
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Overall
, the gross domestic product of the four countries stayed nearly constant over time. Nepal, Linking Words
on the other hand
, had the most stagnant trend of all nations, Linking Words
while
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Malaysia
was the only country to decrease towards the end of the period.
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Malaysia
saw consistent growth from 2010 to 2014, with values ranging from 260 Use synonyms
billion
to 320 Use synonyms
billion
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dollars
, before dropping somewhat in 2015 to around 300 Use synonyms
billion
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dollars
. Despite Use synonyms
this
drop, Linking Words
Malaysia
remained Use synonyms
first,
with the largest Linking Words
GDP
of the three other countries. Nepal, Use synonyms
on the other hand
, remained the Linking Words
last
runner, with over a Linking Words
billion
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dollars
in 2010 and slightly more than 1.5 Use synonyms
billion
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dollars
in 2015.
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In contrast
, Bangladesh and Pakistan have had relative growth over the years. To illustrate, Bangladesh came in second with roughly 190 Linking Words
billion
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dollars
in Use synonyms
GDP
in 2010, and reached a peak of over 290 Use synonyms
billion
in 2015, nearly topping Use synonyms
Malaysia
. Use synonyms
Finally
, Pakistan followed a similar path, with a Linking Words
GDP
of around 110 Use synonyms
billion
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dollars
at the start of the year, Use synonyms
then
steadily increased to just under 200 Linking Words
billion
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dollars
, despite the minor decrease in 2012.Use synonyms
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