The line graph below compares the Gross Domestic Product (GDP) in four countries in billions of US dollar.

The line graph below compares the Gross Domestic Product (GDP) in four countries in billions of US dollar.
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The line graph depicts the gross domestic product (
GDP
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) of four countries, including Bangladesh, Pakistan, Nepal, and
Malaysia
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, from 2010 to 2015 in billions of US
dollars
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.
Overall
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, the gross domestic product of the four countries stayed nearly constant over time. Nepal,
on the other hand
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, had the most stagnant trend of all nations,
while
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Malaysia
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was the only country to decrease towards the end of the period.
Malaysia
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saw consistent growth from 2010 to 2014, with values ranging from 260
billion
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to 320
billion
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dollars
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, before dropping somewhat in 2015 to around 300
billion
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dollars
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. Despite
this
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drop,
Malaysia
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remained
first,
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with the largest
GDP
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of the three other countries. Nepal,
on the other hand
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, remained the
last
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runner, with over a
billion
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dollars
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in 2010 and slightly more than 1.5
billion
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dollars
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in 2015.
In contrast
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, Bangladesh and Pakistan have had relative growth over the years. To illustrate, Bangladesh came in second with roughly 190
billion
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dollars
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in
GDP
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in 2010, and reached a peak of over 290
billion
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in 2015, nearly topping 
Malaysia
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.
Finally
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, Pakistan followed a similar path, with a
GDP
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of around 110
billion
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dollars
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at the start of the year,
then
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steadily increased to just under 200
billion
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dollars
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, despite the minor decrease in 2012.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Gross Domestic Product
  • economic performance
  • growth rate
  • stagnation
  • trend analysis
  • fluctuations
  • economic boom
  • recession
  • industrial sectors
  • projection
  • fiscal policy
  • economic indicator
  • per capita income
  • purchasing power parity
  • upward trend
  • downturn
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