The charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990.

The charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990.
The first chart illustrates the average
years
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of schooling, the second one gives information about the number of scientists and technicians per 1000 people and
third
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chart reveals data about spending on
research
and
development
, all between developing and industrialised
countries
in 1980 and 1990.
Overall
, industrial
countries
had the most average
schools
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years
, number of scientists and technicians and
research
and
development
in
the
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both
years
.
Additionally
, all three categories increased from 1980 to 1990, except the case of spending on
research
and
development
in
developind
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developing
countries
, which
was
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gradually decreased from 1980 to 1990. The average rate of schooling
was
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dramatically rose from 1980 to 1990 for developing
countries
from just over 2
years
to a little less than 4
years
in 1990
resectively
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respectively
. The
years
of education
was
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significantly more in industrialised
countries
with approximately 8
years
in
first
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the first
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reported year to more than 10
years
in 1990.
This
trend was followed in the number of scientists and technicians with almost 10000 in developing
countries
and arond180000 for industrialised ones in 1980 to almost 20000 and 700000in 1990 respectively. The expenditure on
research
and
development
in industrial
countries
was about 170 billion dollars in 1980, which
shrply
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sharply
increas
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increase
increased
to more than 300 billion dollars in 1990,
while
this
trend for developing
countries
followed
opposite
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the opposite
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trend with almost 50 billion dollars in 1980 to less than half in 1990.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, research, development, countries with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enrollment rates
  • primary education
  • secondary education
  • tertiary education
  • literacy rates
  • scientific research
  • research and development (R&D)
  • correlation
  • gender disparities
  • participation
  • developing countries
  • industrialized countries
  • investment
  • comparison
  • impact
  • specified years
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