THE BAR CHART BELOW GIVES INFORMATION ABOUT THE NUMBER OF STUDENTS STUDYING COMPUTER SCIENCE AT A UK university between 2010 and 2012. Summarise the info by selecting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

THE BAR CHART BELOW GIVES INFORMATION ABOUT THE NUMBER OF STUDENTS STUDYING COMPUTER SCIENCE AT A UK university between 2010 and 2012. Summarise the info by selecting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the total number of international and local male and female
students
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who are studying computer science at one of the universities in the UK between the years 2010 and 2012.
Overall
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, the number of British
students
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outnumbered those from overseas over the three years.
However
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, female British
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were the highest compared to other genders and nationalities within the time period. At the beginning of the period, the number of local male learners reached about 38 before experiencing a sharp drop to around 28 the following year.
This
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figure recovered in 2012, with a peak of roughly 47
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. Overseas males,
on the other hand
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, had a steady growth in the three-year period, ranging from about 20 to 39 learners, respectively.
In contrast
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, female British
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began the year with about 35 of them,
then
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increased in the next two years, outnumbering the male locals by approximately 45 in 2012.
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the volume of female
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from other countries rose, they never went over 20
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, placing the least of all types of
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • breakdown
  • increase
  • decrease
  • stable
  • spike
  • drop
  • percentage change
  • overall
  • noteworthy
  • observations
  • main features
  • comparison
  • relevant
  • highlight
  • significant
  • summarize
  • gender analysis
  • male students
  • female students
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