Populations in developing nations are rapidly growing, people now believe that we should turn to GM crops to increase the production of food grains. Discuss the Advantages and Disadvantages of this approach.
In the
last
decade
the population growing.Add a comma
,decade
However
, the production of food
should be increased by turning to GM crops.This
essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of this
method.
To begin
with, in some developing countries they need for genetic approach to supplying food
.In others
workers, feeding all citizens Correct quantifier usage
other
are
difficult Correct subject-verb agreement
is
due to
the increase on
population and reduced Change preposition
in
of
agricultural land and the only solution is using the genetic approach. Change preposition
apply
For instance
, a survey done in 2023 at Sultan Qaboos University showed 80
% ofCorrect word choice
that 80
people
Change noun form
people's
futur
nutrients will depend on MG. Correct your spelling
future
This methods
will be responsible Change the determiner
This method
These methods
of
feeding the next generation.Change the preposition
for
Therefore
, it seems logical that MG important source for
Change preposition
of
food
and the benefits of
it is high.
Change preposition
apply
On the other hand
, the drawbacks of this
approach is
significant because modifying foods will lead to Change the verb form
are
change
in Add an article
a change
the
nutritional value. Change the word
their
For example
,not only modifying fruits or vegetables genetically by adding chemicals
material would help in dabbling the fruit size but Change the noun form
chemical
also
it will change their flavours and reduce the
nutritional value. Change the word
their
However
, people nowadays in developing nations are suffering from illnesses such
as blood
pressure and diabetes Correct word choice
high blood
due to
the lack of vitamins and proteins in their meals.Thus
, the drawbacks of this
method are seems
significant and dangerous.
In conclusion, Change the verb form
seem
although
there are some benefits of using MG such
as giving individuals their needs of
Change preposition
apply
food
, there are some negatives likewise
the food
's value decline
because of the lack Correct subject-verb agreement
declines
on
vitamins and proteins which Change preposition
of
lead
to some diseases Correct subject-verb agreement
leads
such
high
blood pressure and diabetesChange preposition
as high
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