A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary work. you would like to do some voluntary or unpaid work at the museum. write a letter to the museum director to apply for the unpaid work. In your letter * explain why you want to do voluntary work at the museum. * describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. * give details of when you would be available for work.
Dear sir/madam
I am writing with regard to how much I am interested in
work
at your museum and I don't ask Wrong verb form
working
money
at all.
I have to say that I study history at Oxford University, a job in the museum can have a great deal of use for me and my lessons, Change preposition
for money
besides
I love the design of your place, Linking Words
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moreover
my apartment is located near the museum so I do not Add a comma
,moreover
need
spend a lot of time in the traffic jam to arrive there.
I want to bring your attention to my abilities, First I am sociable and I can get along well with other people. Add the particle
toneed
Second,
I was a teacher in the elementary school two years ago Linking Words
thus
when a school comes to visit the monument I can help a lot to Linking Words
managing
children even I will give them information about our ancestors.
Nowadays I am free on the weekends and Mondays and it is my pleasure to do something for Change the verb form
manage
this
kind of institute and my city as a volunteer.
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On the other
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hand
I do my homework during the night If you want, I can fill the position of security after 6.00 pm, It means I look after of doors and study.
I a Add a comma
,hand
Wrong verb form
waiting
wait
your prompt response.
yours faithfully.
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.