A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary work. you would like to do some voluntary or unpaid work at the museum. write a letter to the museum director to apply for the unpaid work. In your letter * explain why you want to do voluntary work at the museum. * describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. * give details of when you would be available for work.

Dear sir/madam I am writing with regard to how much I am interested in

work

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at your museum and I don't ask

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at all. I have to say that I study history at Oxford University, a job in the museum can have a great deal of use for me and my lessons,

besides

I love the design of your place,

moreover

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my apartment is located near the museum so I do not

need

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spend a lot of time in the traffic jam to arrive there. I want to bring your attention to my abilities, First I am sociable and I can get along well with other people.

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I was a teacher in the elementary school two years ago

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when a school comes to visit the monument I can help a lot to

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children even I will give them information about our ancestors. Nowadays I am free on the weekends and Mondays and it is my pleasure to do something for

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kind of institute and my city as a volunteer.

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I do my homework during the night If you want, I can fill the position of security after 6.00 pm, It means I look after of doors and study. I a

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your prompt response. yours faithfully. Saed Tavazoie