Nowadays, increasing
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number of
people
who choose to have personal
celebratingReplace the word
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. There are two
sideChange to a plural noun
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ofChange preposition
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this
. Someone might think it is
wasteCorrect article usage
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of
money
.
Otherwise
, there are
people
thinkCorrect pronoun usage
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that it is for social. In
this
essay, I will argue that there are both
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and
drawbackFix the agreement mistake
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forChange preposition
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celebrating.
Firstly
, more or less, celebrating have to spend
money
for a lot of things in
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. Some
people
who
doesChange the verb form
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not really have
money
to waste on
this
would find it
asCorrect your spelling
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waste of
money
and time. They could be able to use
those Change the determiner
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money
no
the Correct article usage
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better
thingFix the agreement mistake
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such
as food,
houseCorrect article usage
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, and children as 100 baht means a lot for them and their
familyFix the agreement mistake
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.
On the other hand
, some
people
think celebrating is for making
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the connection
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for their future. They will
havingChange the verb form
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fun together. Some
people
lookCorrect pronoun usage
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back might find it
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useless,
while
the
people
who know what to do with those
connectionFix the agreement mistake
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really enjoy
to spendChange the verb form
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money
on and
getWrong verb form
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money
back for more than what they spend.
Furthermore
, in
this
case, most
people
are rich already so they find
thoseChange the determiner
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money
is nothing for them.
In conclusion, there are many
people
in the world
whichCorrect pronoun usage
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thinkingWrong verb form
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differently. Celebrating would be both positive and negative site up to the way
people
do and think but no one should judge other
people
.