Write a letter to your old next door neighbour requesting that something be done about your dog. Include in your letter: The reason for writing and suggestion

#door #neighbour #dog #reason #suggestion

Mr Sharma and Family No 10 Eastwing Trident Park Apartments. Dear Mr Sharma-Sir My name's Sivakumar and I take

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pleasure

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many greetings to you as I write

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letter. I'

happy to say I'

a new tenant of the Trident Park Apartments. Incidentally, I've just moved in a fortnight ago into No. 12 East Wing that's the reason we haven't met as yet and I'

still settling in. The purpose of

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urgent letter

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I want to make an earnest request and am sure you'll appreciate the need and oblige. As you're aware, for the past several days your pet dog has been barking rather incessantly every single night.

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has been very disturbing and I'

unable to concentrate on my studies, which I do quite late in the night upon returning from a tiresome 3rd shift at work/office. My exams are fast approaching and

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is causing me unending concerns, to say the least.

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, rather than approach the apartment caretaker, etc, etc, to ask for their help or intervention, I'

directly writing to you. Indeed, I'

a pet-friendly person, the only reason I don't have one

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I need to focus on my

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Degree. But I'd be more than willing,

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to help you find the reason for your pet's (nocturnal) nightly restlessness and nonstop barking. It looks like it needs

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veterinary

attention Matter of fact, I have a friend in town, who's a vet.

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and get to know

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doubtless you'll see my predicament and your pet's welfare at the same time to do the needful in

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matter. Thanking you in advance and looking forward. With warm regards, Shreyoshi G R

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to your old next door neighbour requesting that something be done about your dog. Include in your letter: The reason for writing and suggestion

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

A 14-year-old young who seriously damaged school was made to clean streets as a punishment. Do you think young criminals should be sent to prison or there are alternative forms of punishment? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people hold the view that a good teacher is more important for education success while others think the student’s attitude is more important to succeed in education. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.