In many countries, young children are looked after by other people while parents go out to work. Is it a good thing or a bad thing?
Nowadays, It is true that young
children
are looked after by someone else when their parents
are working. Although
this
trend
can be a negative development because parents
should take care
their
offspring by themselves, the main benefits are not only to Change preposition
of their
parents
who work full time but also
to children
themselves.
To start with one of the most important reason
why Change to a plural noun
reasons
this
is a positive development is that children
are taken care
by
professionals who have Change preposition
of by
knowledge
and Correct article usage
the knowledge
skills
to safe
and develop Replace the word
save
children
skills
like basic vocal and social skills
to prepare them to entry
school Replace the word
enter
since
young Change preposition
from
children
learn how to play, share, respect other people who are not in their family. For example
, 80% of year one students who were taken care
by
professional kindergartens get along well with other peers or teachers when they go to schools compared to other students who were looked after by their Change preposition
of by
parents
or relatives. Having them in day cares
plays a major role in developing Correct your spelling
daycares
children
Change noun form
children's
skill
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skills
as
a young age which can be seen as an advantage.
Another benefit is that young Change preposition
at
parents
can continue their careers after their maternity leave. Having infants in day cares
can be better for Correct your spelling
daycares
parents
due to
its convenience. For example
, according to
a
research conducted by Bangkok University, it was revealed that 80% of young Correct article usage
apply
parents
in Thailand usually take 6 months maternity
leave and go back to work by Change preposition
of maternity
put
their young Wrong verb form
putting
children
in blanket or infants
cares. So they can contribute Fix the agreement mistake
infant
their
careers without any Change preposition
to their
worrying
. Fix the agreement mistake
worries
This
is popular and playing
an important role in Wrong verb form
plays
this
trend
and many people think it is a positive trend
.
In conclusion, while
parents
go to work, children
are looked after by children
cares. I think there are a couple of benefits in this
trend
because its
convenience for Change preposition
of its
parents
,
Correct word choice
and, skills
skills
and knowledge that Correct article usage
the skills
children
are received
from their Wrong verb form
receive
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daycare
day
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daycare
care
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