Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend. In your letter, recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn explain how your friend could learn this sport suggest that you both learn this sport together.

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Dear Norman, I hope you are doing well, It was great to hear from you that you are interested in learning new sports skills and want my suggestion for

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with, as much as I know your interest and physical abilities I think boxing is the most suitable sport for you as per your physique and energy level and one of our common friends recently told me about a new centre opened near our houses. In

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, centre there is a huge boxing ring and a well-trained teacher who teaches you from the beginner level and luckily is an English person, so it will be very convenient for you to understand the instructions and do tell me if you are interested in

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athletics

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join you and will learn together that will be so much fun for us to learn an amazing game with each other. Best wishes, ramisha

Submitted by ramisha.ejaz23 on Sun Sep 17 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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6 paragraphs

157 words

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