You were recently impressed by a staff member at a supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter: •Describe the situation •Explain how you were helped •State what you are going to do as a result of this good experience Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: To Whom This May Concern,

To Whom

This

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May Concern, I am writing

this

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letter to express my satisfaction with a recent purchase from your

supermarket

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I am Jenny, living in the neighbourhood I ran into your

supermarket

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last

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week to buy some errands. As I was in hasty have bought a conditioner

instead

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of shampoo.

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, I came to your

supermarket

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yesterday to exchange the product. One of your staff named Andrea handled the situation with delicacy even though it has been a week still she accepted my request for a change of product and politely returned me with the shampoo I wanted. I have been very much impressed with

this

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gesture of your staff. It is only a month ago I have moved into the neighbourhood I am very happy to found a store with friendly and welcoming staff.

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, I have decided to join your platinum membership and will be ordering my monthly groceries from your

supermarket

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. Yours Sincerely, Jenny

vyshu.bakkiamSun Sep 17 2023

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

158 words

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