You were recently impressed by a staff member at a supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter: •Describe the situation •Explain how you were helped •State what you are going to do as a result of this good experience Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: To Whom This May Concern,

To Whom
May Concern, I am writing
letter to express my satisfaction with a recent purchase from your
I am Jenny, living in the neighbourhood I ran into your
week to buy some errands. As I was in hasty have bought a conditioner
of shampoo.
, I came to your
yesterday to exchange the product. One of your staff named Andrea handled the situation with delicacy even though it has been a week still she accepted my request for a change of product and politely returned me with the shampoo I wanted. I have been very much impressed with
gesture of your staff. It is only a month ago I have moved into the neighbourhood I am very happy to found a store with friendly and welcoming staff.
, I have decided to join your platinum membership and will be ordering my monthly groceries from your
. Yours Sincerely, Jenny
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