The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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report
informations
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pieces of information
London
and Use synonyms
Sydney
temperatures and hours of daylight Use synonyms
in
the same weekend Change preposition
at
at
December 2018. Change preposition
in
Which are the
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The
of
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from
London
and Use synonyms
Sydney
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have
taken in three days (28-30th December 2018).
In the first table, Verb problem
were
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temperature
was changeable with the lowest minimum Add an article
the temperature
in
3Change preposition
at
°C
and the maximum Use synonyms
temperature
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in
31Change preposition
at
°C
. Use synonyms
Linking Words
While the
sunrise Correct word choice
The
was
rose between 08.05 to 08.06, Unnecessary verb
apply
then
Linking Words
sunset
in order to different Use synonyms
with
one Change preposition
by
seconds
.
For the second table, Change to a singular noun
second
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temperature
was changeable with the lowest minimum Add an article
the temperature
in
17Change preposition
at
°C
and the maximum Use synonyms
temperature
Use synonyms
in
31Change preposition
at
°C
. Use synonyms
While
the sunrise Linking Words
was
rose between 05.45 to 05.46m Unnecessary verb
apply
Linking Words
then
the Rephrase
apply
sunset
in order almost Use synonyms
same
but Correct article usage
the same
it's
quite different with one second only.
In conclusion, Wrong verb form
it was
two
tables Correct article usage
the two
was
provide some information. Unnecessary verb
apply
Firstly
, Linking Words
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Sydney
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Sydney's
temperature
is Use synonyms
exteremely
hot than Correct your spelling
extremely
London
in significant. Use synonyms
Secondly
, Linking Words
for
the sunrise in Change preposition
apply
Sydney
appeared in Use synonyms
early
morning than Add an article
the early
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London
. Change preposition
in London
Lastly
for the Linking Words
sunset
, Use synonyms
London
Use synonyms
have
Change the verb form
has
Use synonyms
sunset
in Correct article usage
a sunset
late
afternoon than Add an article
the late
Sydne
which dawn in Correct your spelling
Sydney
evening
. Add an article
the evening
Linking Words
At
the end, that Change the preposition
In
different
Replace the word
difference
caused
by astronomy Add a missing verb
is caused
and
geographic position, and seasonal Correct word choice
apply
reason
in scientific issues.Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
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Vocabulary: The word "informations" was used 2 times.
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