Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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music
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good
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bring
people
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music
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people
to come together.
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music
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a
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an
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have
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society
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society
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keep
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at
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to
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people
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interested
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. Use synonyms
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every Correct subject-verb agreement
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built
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build
relation
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people
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apply
also
.
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hold
music
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program
. For instance, if there Fix the agreement mistake
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is
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people
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come
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people
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own
music
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as well as
dance.
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To conclude
, I strongly, agree that Linking Words
music
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help
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cultures
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