Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

I strongly, agree

with

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that

music

is

good

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a good

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way to

bringing

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bring

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people

of different cultures and ages together. In my own opinion,

music

can help

people

to come together. It is said that

music

is

a

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art

as well as

science.

Music

have

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so many benefits like it gives clam to a human. Science

have

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porve

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prove

proven

that science help

is

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in

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the hospital.

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, if

a

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apply

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group

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groups

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group

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have kept

an

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a

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music

program in

a

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socity

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society

then

a

socity

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society

member will come together which

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helps

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help

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helps

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people

to come together.

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, the government should

kept

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a program which

help

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the

people

to come

at

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to

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one place.

Hence

, groups should go to many programs.

Every

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age

people

are

interted

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interested

in

music

.

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help

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helps

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every

nation

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nation's

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people

to

built

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build

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relation

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with each other because

Music

is good for

people

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people's

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health

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apply

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also

. There are so many ways in which

due to

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music

public

from

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of

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different

age

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ages

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come to many

place

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places

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. The government should support NGOs which

held

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hold

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music

program

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programs

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. For instance, if there

will been

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is

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an

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a

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concert

be

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by

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a singer

then

there

so

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are so

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many

people

come

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who come

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from different

age

, culture, state, country and place so

this

help to develop peace in the nation.

However

, dance

also

play

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an

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great role in bringing

people

together. Every culture

have

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has

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its

on

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own

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music

as well as

dance.

To conclude

, I strongly, agree that

music

help

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helps

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in many ways like forming a group. In my own opinion,

music

is a good way of bringing

people

of different

culture

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cultures

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and

age

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ages

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together.