You have purchased a product recently from store, later on it's stopped working. Write a letter to store manager about this issue. In your letter - mention about the product and share your feeling - discuss about what is the issue - what you need from the store manager

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Dear Mr. Patel, I write

this

letter to share my disappointment about the product that I purchased from your store

last

week, which has stopped functioning properly.

Firstly

, I would like to inform you that I purchased a brand new Dell laptop from your store

last

week. When I started using it, I felt relaxed, and I was able to finish my important office work within a fraction of a minute without spending more hours.

However

, suddenly, it stopped working. I tried to power

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the laptop by pressing the power button, but unfortunately, the screen is not displaying. It seems like there were some malfunctions at the hardware level.

Due to

this

, I am not able to work on assigned items and meet the deadlines.

Therefore

, I would like to request that you send your hardware technician to visit my home and fix

this

issue as much as possible so I can finish all my pending work. Kindly treat

this

matter as your top priority, and I look forward to your prompt solution to fix the issue. Yours faithfully, Amit Gelot

Submitted by Amit Gelot on Sun Sep 17 2023

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You have purchased a product recently from store, later on it's stopped working. Write a letter to store manager about this issue. In your letter - mention about the product and share your feeling - discuss about what is the issue - what you need from the store manager

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Many people believe that formal “pen and paper” examinations are not the best method of assessing educational achievement. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance such as food and housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The reason that most people are in debt is the overuse as well as irresponsible use of credit cards. Banks ought to do a background check and only issue credit cards to individuals who have the ability to pay back their debts. What is your opinion?

today's teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generations. discuss this view and give your own opinion