You have purchased a product recently from store, later on it's stopped working. Write a letter to store manager about this issue. In your letter - mention about the product and share your feeling - discuss about what is the issue - what you need from the store manager

Dear Mr. Patel, I write
letter to share my disappointment about the product that I purchased from your store
week, which has stopped functioning properly.
, I would like to inform you that I purchased a brand new Dell laptop from your store
week. When I started using it, I felt relaxed, and I was able to finish my important office work within a fraction of a minute without spending more hours.
, suddenly, it stopped working. I tried to power
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the laptop by pressing the power button, but unfortunately, the screen is not displaying. It seems like there were some malfunctions at the hardware level.
Due to
, I am not able to work on assigned items and meet the deadlines.
, I would like to request that you send your hardware technician to visit my home and fix
issue as much as possible so I can finish all my pending work. Kindly treat
matter as your top priority, and I look forward to your prompt solution to fix the issue. Yours faithfully, Amit Gelot
Submitted by Amit Gelot on

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