Last month you had a holiday abroad where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you didn’t write earlier invite them to come and stay with you.

Dear All, I hope you are all doing well. I haven't written earlier because I have been doing my project as I mentioned when we were on holiday. I have to complete my master's thesis by next week. Thankfully, It is on track now. I would like to say thank you for your kindness and your hospitality that you accepted to me staying at your house. It was
a pleasure to explore the city with you. I saw the holiday pictures which you shared with me, thanks for that. They are all wonderful. I had
a fantastic holiday. I would like to invite you to London and it would be great if you stayed at my home. It would be
an honour for me. I have a cosy guest room at my home. You will feel comfortable when you stay there. London would be brilliant in autumn. Don't you think
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here next month? I hope to see you soon, Best wishes, Jane Fonda
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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