Last month you had a holiday abroad where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you didn’t write earlier invite them to come and stay with you.

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Dear All, I hope you are all doing well. I haven't written earlier because I have been doing my project as I mentioned when we were on holiday. I have to complete my master's thesis by next week. Thankfully, It is on track now. I would like to say thank you for your kindness and your hospitality that you accepted to me staying at your house. It was

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a pleasure to explore the city with you. I saw the holiday pictures which you shared with me, thanks for that. They are all wonderful. I had

such

a fantastic holiday. I would like to invite you to London and it would be great if you stayed at my home. It would be

such

an honour for me. I have a cosy guest room at my home. You will feel comfortable when you stay there. London would be brilliant in autumn. Don't you think

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you are coming

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here next month? I hope to see you soon, Best wishes, Jane Fonda

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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1Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

167 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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